Thursday, March 24, 2016

On March 10, 2016, Lize Burr posted an article on the Burnt Orange Report blog titled,  “Why Keep Secrets About Texas Women’s Health?”.  Senator Jane Nelson sent a letter to the Health and Human Services Commission Executive to explain that Texas women have more care than they have ever had before.  She firmly believes the authors choose to limit their research.  Lize refers to Senator Nelson’s letter to an aria and believes that women need and want to understand the details of what’s working and what is not working for Texas women.  

She makes valid points that the data that represents Women’s Health Program is  an important piece of information that needs to be understood.  She further explains how the Senate could build trust with Texas women if she provided a clear image of her way of thinking. 

This article is aimed for women or anyone that is interested in women’s health care.  In my opinion, the article could be arranged a little better.  At first it was hard to follow.  Paragraphs should be split to support ideas and help the flow of information. Acronyms should be listed after the word has been spelled out the first time.  

I agree with Lize that women in Texas should know or at the very least be aware of their healthcare options.  Most of time state leaders want you to believe that they don’t cut health care.  As unfortunate as it may seem it happens. She ends the article by stating that “trust and understanding are essential for a good government”.  This drives the point home to understanding what is, and what is not working for Women in Texas.





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